Excellent! Very tight and lean and funny, great dialogue. I don't know if I'm being influenced by your recent noir Dylan presentation, but it feels to me like an excerpt from a pulp noir mystery novel. Is it part of a longer fiction piece you were working on? Thanks.
Best line: "It makes you feel alive and stupid at the same time."
My wife will love what Breaker said about Eddie Vedder.
Excellent! Very tight and lean and funny, great dialogue. I don't know if I'm being influenced by your recent noir Dylan presentation, but it feels to me like an excerpt from a pulp noir mystery novel. Is it part of a longer fiction piece you were working on? Thanks.